corrected many things - NEEDS FULL REWORK

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--- a/docs/modules/venus/pages/deploy.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/venus/pages/deploy.adoc
@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Swarmlab
 :experimental:


-This is the area where you will quide you to Build the network  pou theleis
+This is the area where we will guide you to build the network you require

 == Deploy

@ -21,12 +21,12 @@ We can *create* the network by using the btn:[Create Network] button

 To start, we need to have a Network Stack Name 

-This will bring up all the services, volumes, networks and everything else
+This will contain all the services, volumes, networks and everything else
 in an isolated environment. 

 === Name 

-A name or something that gives  the subject of your project. 
+A name that describes your network. 

 === Start and End Time

@ -61,6 +61,8 @@ image::venus:manage-deploy-showusers.png[manage user,700,float=center]

 and then the buttons above to add or remove the certain user whe want using the btn:[action] button

+ATTENTION: YOU WILL HAVE TO ADD YOURSELF MANUALY!!!
+
 == Video

 === Create Network
--- a/docs/modules/venus/pages/join.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/venus/pages/join.adoc
@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ Swarmlab
 :experimental:


-This is the area where you will quide you to Join the network  pou theleis
+This is the area where we will guide you to Join the network you desire

 == Browse

-You can easily browse throught the available *labrooms* in the list using the search bar at the top.
+You can easily browse throught the available *networks* in the list using the search bar at the top.

 .browsing network
 image::venus:join.png[Browsing network,700,float=center]
@ -31,33 +31,31 @@ image::venus:join-info.png[network info,700,float=center]

 To request network access we use the btn:[Request Access] button

-TIP: To button emfanisete mono otam den to echeis kanei idi pou simeni oti ama to kaneis mia fora den tha emfanistei 
+TIP: the button is only visible if youre NOT already connected!


 == Connect

 image:venus:join-status.png[network connect,300,float=right]

-afou kanete request kai sas dechti o owner tha emanistoun accept  icons dipla sto network pou thelete kai stin antistichi stili
+After requesting access and it being granted by the owner we will be able to see the accept icon.

+when this icon appears it meant we are ready to use the network using the btn:[Start Network] button

-meta apo afto  mporeite na chrissimopiisete to btn:[Start Network] button
+obviously the network has to be up and running

-fysika kai prepei prota to network na einai up and running
+the *join* column informs us about our connection status

-sto column *join* mporeite na deite an iste sindedemnoi idi sto diktyo i ochi 
+TIP: we can connect as many networks as we please

-TIP: mporeite na sindethite se osa diktya thelete
+=== connect mode

-
-=== connect modus
-
-.connect modus
+.connect mode
 image::venus:join-connect-mode.png[connect modus,700,float=center]

 The *host* option is used to make the interface look like they are running on the host itself

-The *container* option containerize the containers networking 
+The *container* option containerizes the containers networking 

 ==== host

@ -66,9 +64,9 @@ image:venus:host-connection.png[host connect,350,float=right]

 It allows the Virtual Network Interface greater network access than it can normally get.

-If you use host then you’ll get all ports listening on the host. 
+If you use 'host' then you’ll get all ports listening on the host. 

-This means you will need to check the services you runninf closely (especially if it’s not yours, e.g. an official one provided by a software project) to make sure you don’t inadvertently expose extra services on the network.
+This means you will have to monitor the services you run closely (especially if it’s not yours, e.g. an official one provided by a software project) to make sure you don’t inadvertently expose extra services to the network.

 TIP: With this option you *can* access the other participants in the network and vice versa from your computer 

@ -76,7 +74,7 @@ TIP: With this option you *can* access the other participants in the network and

 image:venus:container-connection.png[container connect,350,float=right]

-A container option is used to isolate the services from different container and the host itself
+A container option is used to isolate the services from the outside world

 TIP: With this option you can *NOT* access the other participants in the network and vice versa from your computer 

@ -85,16 +83,16 @@ TIP: With this option you can *NOT* access the other participants in the network
 .connect status
 image::venus:join-connect-status.png[connect status,700,float=center]

-after connecting vlepoume 
+after connecting we will be seing something along the following: 

-* to status sto collumn *join*
-* emfanisete to btn:[Leave Network] button, to opoio mporoume na to chrissimopiisoume gia na kanoume disconnect
-* stin grammi  *Interface* emfanisete to onoma tou interface kai i ean einai up i down
-* stin grammi  *Network* emfanisete to onoma tou interface pou dimiourgithike
+* our status in the *join* column
+* the btn:[Leave Network] button we can use to disconnect
+* the *Interface* name and whether it is up or down
+* the creted *Network*(interface) name

 === connect info

-tis parapano plirofories tis pernoume epissis using the btn:[Service Info] button
+all of the above information is also accessible using the btn:[Service Info] button

 .connect status info
 image::venus:join-connect-status-info.png[connect status info,700,float=center]
@ -103,7 +101,7 @@ image::venus:join-connect-status-info.png[connect status info,700,float=center]

 image::venus:join-connect-status.png[connect status,700,float=center]

-* sto parapanp image vlepoume to btn:[Leave Network] button, to opoio mporoume na to chrissimopiisoume gia na kanoume disconnect
+* the btn:[Leave Network] button -> use it to disconnect


 == Video
--- a/docs/modules/venus/pages/overview-network.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/venus/pages/overview-network.adoc
@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Swarmlab
 :!table-caption:
 :page-pagination:
  
-This is the area where you will quide you to Build the network  or Join one 
+This is the area where we will guide you to create a network or join an existing one

 == Deploy

--- a/docs/modules/venus/pages/overview-share.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/venus/pages/overview-share.adoc
@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Swarmlab
 :!table-caption:
 :page-pagination:
  
-This is the area where you will quide you to share app and volume
+This is the area where you can share your apps or your volumes.

 == App

--- a/docs/modules/venus/pages/share-app.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/venus/pages/share-app.adoc
@ -8,16 +8,16 @@ Swarmlab
 :experimental:


-This is the area where you will quide you to share you app
+This is the area where we will guide you to share you app

 == browse apps

 .share app
 image::venus:share.png[share app,700,float=center]

-sto menou vlepoume ta apps (Instanches) have running prin messo hybrid
+The menu shows the instances that are running (we have started them beforehand using swarmlab hybrid)

-edo loipon mporoume na epilexoume poia apo afta theloume na kanoume share
+Now we can choose the ones we want to share.

 === app info 

@ -31,42 +31,41 @@ image::venus:share-info.png[app info,700,float=center]

 === share app

-To share you app we use the btn:[share]
+To share an app we use the btn:[share]
 button

 .browsing network 
 image::venus:share-networks.png[browse network,700,float=center]

-kato apo to btn:[share] emfanisonte ta diktya pou imaste sindedemnoi
+Underneath the btn:[share] we can see all the networks we are connected to

-epilegoume to diktyo ekeiono pou theloume gia na diamirasoume to app
+We now choose the one over which we would like to share the app.

 === share status

 .share status 
 image::venus:share-networks-info.png[browse network,350,float=right]

-TIP: mporoume na doume to status me to btn:[shared], otan den einai shared emfanisete to button btn:[network]
+TIP: we can see our status using the btn:[shared], when the app is shared the btn:[network] button will appear.

 == share info

 .share info
 image::venus:share-app-info.png[share info,350,float=right]

-me to btn:[info] mporoume na doume plirofories sxetika me to app pou kaname share
+the btn:[info] shows information about the shared app

-* to url p.x. pou mporoume na diamirasoume stous users
-* to url pou mporoume emeis i idioi na sindethounme
+* the "public" that we can share to other users
+* the private url we can use to connect ourselves

-
-TIP: mporoume na doume oti emeis chrissimopioume tin address tou eth0 pou einai sindedemnei me to pc mas
+TIP: for example we can see that we are using eth0 and we can also see the ip address.

 [source,bash]
 ----
 http://172.26.0.2:8888/lab?token=819cfaa82577cc7ec49fec0a39f57bc12e37883119237cf3
 ----

-eno stous stous users prepei na stiloume to linkl pou vlepoume  sto *URL to send to participants*
+The following is the link the users have to use.

 [source,bash]
 ----
@ -75,12 +74,12 @@ http://10.1.2.67:8888/lab?token=819cfaa82577cc7ec49fec0a39f57bc12e37883119237cf3

 == undo share

-To undo  the share pou kaname we use the btn:[Default] button
+To stop sharing we can use the btn:[Default] button

 .share default info
 image::venus:share-info-default.png[share default info,350,float=right]

-TIP: mporoume na doume to status me to btn:[shared], otan den einai shared emfanisete to button btn:[network]
+TIP: we can again check the status using the btn:[shared], when shared, the btn:[network] button will appear.


 == Video
@ -96,7 +95,7 @@ video::565627934[vimeo]
 ===  Revoke access to shared 

 ****
-TIP: Learn how to  revoke access to a shared 
+TIP: Learn how to  revoke access to a shared app

 video::565635682[vimeo]
 ****
--- a/docs/modules/venus/pages/share-volume-connect.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/venus/pages/share-volume-connect.adoc
@ -8,79 +8,79 @@ Swarmlab
 :experimental:


-This is the area where you will quide you to connect volumes
+This is the area where you will learn to connect volumes

 == connect

-shared volumes apo Users info tha paroume we using the  image:venus:volume-more.png[] icon
+As usual we can get info using the image:venus:volume-more.png[] icon

 .connect volume
 image::venus:volume-shared-info.png[Volume shared info,700,float=center]

-TIP: oi plirofories emfanisonte gia to diktyo pou tha epilexoume (sto top-left menou) kai oxi gia ola ta diktya.
+TIP: to get info about a network we first have to select it


-gia na kaneis volume connect we using the  image:hybrid:more.png[] icon 
+to connect to a volume we use the image:hybrid:more.png[] icon 

-tha emfanistei to akoloutho menou
+we will be greeted by the following:

 .connect volume
 image::venus:volume-connect.png[Volume connect,700,float=center]

-kanoume apla click stp btn:[Connect_to] button 
+here we can just click the btn:[Connect_to] button 

-meta apo afto to volume pou ekanes connect tha emfanistei  sto menou *My Connections on Shared volumes*
+Our volume should be visible under *My Connections on Shared volumes*

-WARNING: echoume kanei connect ston server me afti tin kinissi kai ochi ston katalogo
+WARNING: this step ONLY initialized the server connection and not the actual file system

 === Connect info

-plirofories sxetika me to connect pou kaname vlepoume sto menou 
+information about what we just did can be found in the menu 

 .volume info
 image::venus:volume-connect-info.png[Volume connect info,700,float=center]

-TIP: sto icon image:venus:volume-mount-no.png[]  vlepoume ean exoume kanei mount ston katalogo i oxi
+TIP: the image:venus:volume-mount-no.png[] icon tells us if the file system dir is mounted or not


 === mount

-we using the 
+we use the 
 image:venus:volume-mount-no.png[]
 icon 

 === umount

-we using the 
+we use the 
 image:venus:volume-mount-yes.png[]
 icon


 === mount info

-gia na vreis to directory pou echeis kanei share  we use the image:venus:volume-info-icon.png[] icon
+to locate the shared directory wew use the image:venus:volume-info-icon.png[] icon

-pou mporeis na vreis sto menou *My Connections on Shared volumes* kai dipla sto antisticho volume pou theeis na kaneis info
+This can be found under *My Connections on Shared volumes* and next to the corresponding volume

-o katalogos p.x. sto paradeigma tha einai tou styl
+e.g. the dir in the example is 

 [source,bash]
 ----
 /data/appl/ok/swarmlab-venus/src-local/hybrid/connect/dLZWqFyPxyxOL1DiJ3xCHJhi6ziLK7MJ/volumes_client/dLZWqFyPxyxOL1DiJ3xCHJhi6ziLK7MJ_volumename
 ----

-se afto mporeite na valete oti archeio thelete na diamoirasete
+here we can place any files we want to share

-TIP: to parapano doulevi mono otan vlepoum this icon image:venus:volume-mount-yes.png[] 
+TIP: This only works as long as the image:venus:volume-mount-yes.png[] is visible.

 == disconnect

-gia na kaneis disconnect we using the  image:venus:volume-delete-icon.png[] icon 
+to disconnect we use the  image:venus:volume-delete-icon.png[] icon 

-pou mporeis na vreis sto menou *My Connections on Shared volumes* kai dipla sto antisticho volume pou theeis na kaneis info
+that can be found in the *My Connections on Shared volumes* menu and next to the corresponding entry.


-TIP: me to disconnect svinete i sindessi pou ekanes share kai ochi ta dedomena pou echeis sto antisticho directory
+TIP: When disconnecting, only the connection is terminated and the actual data remains untouched.


 == Video
--- a/docs/modules/venus/pages/share-volume-share.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/venus/pages/share-volume-share.adoc
@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Swarmlab
 :experimental:


-This is the area where you will quide you to share volumes
+This is the area where we will guide you to share volumes

 == share

@ -17,57 +17,57 @@ image::venus:volume-left.png[Volume menou,700,float=center]

 === create

-gia na kaneis volume share we using the  image:venus:volume-share-icon.png[] icon 
+To share a volume we will be using the  image:venus:volume-share-icon.png[] icon 

-tha emfanistei to akoloutho menou
+and be greeted by the following menu:

 .create volume
 image::venus:volume-create.png[Volume create,700,float=center]

-dose onoma kai rights kai pata to btn:[Create Volume] button 
+Please choose a name before clicking on the btn:[Create Volume] button 

-meta apo afto to volume pou ekanes share tha emfanistei sto menou *My shared Volumes*
+You can now locate the volume under *My shared Volumes*

 .volume info
 image::venus:volume-info.png[Volume create info,700,float=center]

 === Directory info

-gia na vreis to directory pou echeis kanei share  we use the image:venus:volume-info-icon.png[] icon
+To locate the shared directory we can use the image:venus:volume-info-icon.png[] icon

-pou mporeis na vreis sto menou *My shared Volumes* kai dipla sto antisticho volume pou theeis na kaneis info
+This is located under the *My shared Volumes* and next to the corresponding volume.

 .volume directory info
 image::venus:volume-create-info.png[Volume dir info,700,float=center]

-o katalogos p.x. sto paradeigma tha einai tou styl
+e.g. the dir from the example is 

 [source,bash]
 ----
 /data/appl/ok/swarmlab-venus/src-local/hybrid/connect/dLZWqFyPxyxOL1DiJ3xCHJhi6ziLK7MJ/volumes/dLZWqFyPxyxOL1DiJ3xCHJhi6ziLK7MJ_myvolume
 ----

-se afto mporeite na valete oti archeio thelete na diamoirasete
+here we can drop any file we would like to share

 === delete

-gia na kaneis delete we using the  image:venus:volume-delete-icon.png[] icon 
+To delete we can simply use the image:venus:volume-delete-icon.png[] icon 

-pou mporeis na vreis sto menou *My shared Volumes* kai dipla sto antisticho volume pou theeis na kaneis delete
+again found under the *My shared Volumes* menu and next to the corresponding volume.

 .volume info
 image::venus:volume-info.png[Volume create info,700,float=center]

-TIP: me to delete svinete i sindessi pou ekanes share kai ochi ta dedomena pou echeis sto antisticho directory
+TIP: deleting a volume only terminates the connection and DOES NOT delete the stored data.

 == shared volume info

-me to pou tha kaneis shared opos perigrafete parapano tha emfanistei sto menou *Shared volumes*
+After sharing a volme it will be available under the *Shared volumes* menu

 .shared volume info
 image::venus:volume-shared-info.png[Volume shared info,700,float=center]

-TIP: stous users tha emfanistei antisticha i idia pliroforia. me tou pou tha epilexoun fysika na doun tis sxetikes plriofories tou diktyou
+TIP: other users that look for your network will also have the above info


 == Video
@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ video::565647143[vimeo]
 === Remove Shared volume

 ****
-TIP: Learn how to remove a shared
+TIP: Learn how to remove a shared volume

 video::565659724[vimeo]
 ****
--- a/docs/modules/venus/pages/share-volume.adoc
+++ b/docs/modules/venus/pages/share-volume.adoc
@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Swarmlab
 :experimental:


-This is the area where you will quide you to share  and connect to volumes
+This is the area where we will guide you to share  and connect to volumes

 == main menou

@ -24,19 +24,19 @@ on the left mporoume na doume volumes pou kanete eseis share
 image::venus:volume-left.png[Volume menou,700,float=center]


-sto menou *Virtual networks* sto pano meros  vlepoume ta diktya sta opoia imaste connect
+Using the *Virtual networks* menu we can identify all the networks we are connected to.

-sto menou *My shared Volumes* sto kato meros  vlepoume ta volumes pou kaname share
+Using the *My shared Volumes* menu we can locate all the volumes that we have shared.

-TIP: plirofories gia to kathe network echoume when we use the  image:venus:volume-more.png[] icon
+TIP: For more info we can always use the image:venus:volume-more.png[] icon

 == shared from others

-sta dexia mporoume na doume voumes pou ginonte shared apo sindedemneous users
+To the right we can find the volumes that other connected users have shared.

-kai ep[issi sto kato meros se poia apo afta iste sindedemnos idi
+and also see if we are already connected to them or not.

 .volume from others
 image::venus:volume-right.png[Volume others,700,float=center]

-TIP: oi plirofories emfanisonte gia to diktyo pou tha epilexoume (sto top-left menou) kai oxi gia ola ta diktya. gia na paroume aftes afta ta info we using the  image:venus:volume-more.png[] icon
+TIP: the info provided belongs to the selected network. If you wish to get info about another network just select it.